Draft Evaluation - My comments

Looking back on my draft I can clearly see what I can change to make my magazine look more professional, neater and make it relate more to the genre. The colour scheme is dull and can do with lifting up to make it look more 'rock' style. The vinyl on the contents is to re create the image of classic rock but this can be re thought about as it may not appeal to certain audiences who I'd like to aim the image at and some of the pictures on the DPS can make it look too busy especially when the subject isn't looking at the camera. I need to work on these aspects and more to make my magazine look better and more professional to reach the grade i would like to and to make it look like the genre chosen fits.

Draft Evaluation - Teachers comments

Cover:
Interesting masthead, well laid out. Font looks a bit too small, lacks impact. Subject isn't looking at the camera which loses the audience interaction element. Colour scheme dull, not like a rock magazine.

Contents:
Polaroid images need word, layout is a bit messy - need tightening up. Why use vinyl in a download age?

DPS:
Best element of three but subject only looks at the camera in one shot, why? Decide on an border for the images for more impact.

Magazine Draft: Front Cover, Contents Page and DPS

DPS Development

The development of my double page spread to achieve my final product.

Contents Page Development

The development of my contents page and how I added small details, changed the font sizes and the font to produce my final product.

Front Cover Development

The development of my front cover for  my magazine draft. Here is different ways in which I changed the font the colours the sizes etc to produce my final product.